Dear Sir/Madam,
I am sending this letter to keep you updated with what we are doing. We didn't recieve alot of donations for the red cross and we are sorry about that. But we have managed to raise the awareness for your charity so that might help your charity alittle bit. I think we didn't recieve many donations because people are embarast to take old clothes and toys in school for charity. I think we shoud try doing it outside of school so people are not with their school mats sop they dont need to be embarast. We have also viseted Browick primary school to raise awareness at a different school and have younger students donating.
Yours Faithfuly BMoore
James Gibbon's resources for print based media
11 years ago
LO4 You attempt to make some comment on the success and 'failures' of the campaign. You cite the embarrassment ofr target audioence and pre conceived ideas. Unfortunately there are a number of SPG errors in your letter.
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